Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Mommio: NaNoWriMo Sneak Peek- Connor

In his home he saw Jessica had disappeared from every picture of them.  After closer examination Fredrick notices burn marks on one half of each photo.  Just as Fredrick finished looking over the pictures he heard the door swing open.  Hearing George’s voice Fredrick decided to ask him about that shadow.  After an hour of talking of this shadow they talk about the burn marks on the photos.  Suddenly Fredrick hears a voice.  Noting the voice is in his head Fredrick stops talking to George.  The voice belongs to a girl, no not just any girl, Jessica.  Jessica starts telling Fredrick that a dragon kidnapped her.  To this Fredrick thinks Yeah right, Drama Queen and I’m the king of America.  Fredrick then hears Jessica say Listen King Idiot, you found burn marks on those photos and in the photo you took that shadow was next to me.  Insulted by the fact that Jessica had just called him an idiot Fredrick just listened for half the lecture and then said Look can we just cut to the chase? Where are you?  Are you okay and please tell me what I have to do.  Jessica just replied with I don’t know, but this dragon seems to be a creature of extreme power.

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