The Secret Adventures of Jack
By Gabe
One day there was a little boy named Jack. Jack decided he wanted to be a king. To be a king you have to get to the tallest volcano. At the top of the volcano there is a crown so you can be king. So Jack decided to go to the tallest volcano to be king. First, he went to his backyard. When he got in his backyard he heard something say "You are the chosen one. You are the chosen one." Then a metal sword and shield and a metal puppy sword and shield popped up. So his dog could come with him. He went through the swamp.
At 3:00 pm he stopped and then a giant spider came out. He slashed it 5 times and he killed it. Then he got to the tallest volcano. He was half way up and a bunch of zombies came out. It took him 10 hours, but he killed them all. Then he got the crown and he went home. He became king and he got a castle.
2 comments:
Oh my gravy! Gabe that's an AWESOME story! I'm so proud that you listened to what we talked about last night and put it into this great story. You are really a great writer, and I hope you write more fantastic stories like this again!
What an adventure...you sure put a lot of thought into this story. Loved reading it. Do more...do more.
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