Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Avery: Blog Of The Day

The Secret Adventures Of Jack
By Avery
     One day a baby boy named Jack went to the store with his mama. Right when they got to the lettuce Jack heard something, it sounded like his boss.
     Jack looked at his tiny watch and said "Hello boss. What do you need?"
     "I need you to go on your first mission. When you get home when you go outside to play, you have to go into the log house and I will tell you everything. Okay."
     "Got it boss. Bye."
     Jack closed his watch and started to fake cry, so that he could go home.
     "Jack, stop crying. I am going to take you home.", said his Mom in a mad voice.
     His mom got him in the car and started to drive home.
     "Jack are you home yet? Oh okay you got her to take you home. You are almost there. Your mom is looking at you, close the watch!"
     "Okay boss, bye bye.", said Jack.
     Mommio looked at him and smiled. She started to call Daddio (his dad). "Hello Gabe, Can I please talk to Daddio? Thank you. Hi, um, I am taking Jack home because he was crying at the store. I think he needs a nap. Yes, really. Okay, bye." Mommio hung up the phone and they were home. Mommio unbuckled Jack and took him inside and she put him in his bedroom to sleep. Thirty minutes later Jack woke up and started crying. Gabe came to the door and let Jack out. 
     Jack ran outside and into the log house. "I am here boss. What do I have to do?", asked Jack.
     "Okay, your mission is to defeat our arch enemy Mr. Fluffington. The rat hiding in the compost. I have left stuff for you in the sand box.", said the boss.
     "What kind of stuff did you leave for me?"
     "A laser pen, Swiss army knife, bamboo stick, a belt to hold all of your stuff, a mouse trap, cheese, and diapers, for when you need to use the bathroom."
     "Cool! This is the first time you ever let me use diapers.", said Jack in a very happy voice.
     Jack went to the sand box put on the stuff. "Where is my knife?", said Jack.
     Jack saw Max with the knife and ran to him. Jack tried to pull the knife away. Then when Max and Jack heard Mommio call for snack, Max dropped the knife and ran for the snack. Jack ran to the shed and set the cheese down on the ground by the compost. The rat came out and started to eat the cheese. Jack ran to the rat.
     "Mr. Fluffington, we meet again.", said Jack.
     He got out the bamboo stick and charged at the rat. The rat bit the stick in half.
     "I didn't see that coming.", said Jack.
     Jack dropped the stick and got out the laser pen and shot lasers at the rat.
     "You missed, dummy.", said the rat.
     "That was my only laser."
     So then Jack had to use his diaper. He took off his old one and put on one of his new ones. Jack threw the mouse trap at the rat and it got the rat! But then the rat got loose, he stole Jack's knife and threw it in the trash. So Jack took off his diaper and threw it at the rat. The rat fell down and could not get up. Jack picked up the rat and threw it out into the fields. Then Jack went inside because it was dinner and lived a kind of weird life.     

1 comments:

Nana

So much detail...I love it. You did a great job...wish Jack could read. He would be proud to be the hero in this story.

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