The Secret Adventures Of Jack
By Connor
Once upon a time there was an incredibly smart baby named Jack who loved working on inventions. One day he made a machine to take him into his favorite video games. While everyone in his family thought he was taking a nap he was building this amazing device. He turned it on and the lights in his bedroom, where he was testing it, flickered on and off. There was a loud thump as his hand hit the button and then he walked into the machine, pulled a lever and the machine made a loud whining noise. When Jack's family heard the noise they thought he was crying to get out. Suddenly Jack was in the Jumpstart game that his brother Max had gotten for his birthday. He looked all over the place, but he couldn't see any of the kids in the living room at his house. He got tired of being in the Jumpstart game so he walked into the machine again and went back to his bedroom. He was home before anyone noticed he was gone.
1 comments:
Great story...lots of detail...and fun to read. You are doing such good work. I can see a picture in my mind what you are describing. I love it.
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